1   Three Drafts of the Charter Oath, 18682
(a) Draft by Yuri Kimimasa
General Outline on Legislative Matters
1. It is requested that a system be established under which common people may be permitted to pursue their respective callings so that there may be no discontent.
2. It is necessary for the samurai and common people to unite in carrying out vigorously the administration of economic and financial affairs (keirin).
3. Knowledge shall be sought throughout the world so as to widen and strengthen the foundations of imperial rule.
4. The term of office held by qualified men [selected by the han] (koshi) must be limited, Thereafter they must yield their positions to talented men.
5. All matters of state must be decided by open discussion (koron) [with the participation of all factions on han concerned] and must not be discussed privately.
The intent of the [proposed] League of the Daimyo (Shoko Kairnei) may be announced along the lines discussed above. [It is further recommend­ed that] general amnesty be announced concurrently.

(b)
Amended Draft by Fukuoka Takachika
A Compact
1. An assembly consisting of daimyo shall be established, and all matters of state shall be decided by open discussion.
2. It is requested that a system be established under which not only the civil and military officials, but also the common people may be permitted to pursue their respective callings so that there may be no discontent.
3. The high and low shall all unite in carrying out vigorously the administration of economic and financial affairs.
4. Knowledge shall be sought throughout the world so as to broaden and strengthen the foundations of imperial rule.
5. The term of office of those appointed [by the imperial government] must be limited. Thereafter they must yield their positions to talented men.
The above may be announced as the intents. When the League [of the Daimyo] is formed, it is suggested that general amnesty be announced con­currently.

(c)
Draft by Kido Koin
Oath
1. An assembly consisting of daimyo shall be established, and all matters of state shall be decided by open discussion.
2. The high and low shall all unite in carrying out the administration of economic and financial affairs.
3. It is requested that a system be established under which not only the civil and military officials, but also the common people may be permitted to pursue their respective callings so that there may be no discontent.
4. Evil practices of the past5 shall be discarded and [all our actions] shall follow the accepted practices of the world.
5. Knowledge shall be sought throughout the world so as to broaden and strengthen the foundations of imperial rule.
All 3 drafts from Lu Sources of Japanese History  p.35-6